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crits 2 Years, 6 Months ago Karma: 0
Hey everyone I'm new to this so hopefully I'll do this right. Ok I'm at animation mentor so I'm still learning but I used character from animation mentor to show a pitcher throwing the ball in a very cartoony exaggerated way. I also have the character swing at the pitch missing the ball and spinning into a fall. This is at it's blocking stage and intend to add a lot more breakdowns and little things to the hands and feet. Please let me know what you think and there needs to be anything fixed. Thank you in advance for you time.
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Re:crits 2 Years, 6 Months ago Karma: 0
Hey...!!! thats a cool one bro..!!!! cant exactly comment as this is still in blocking stage..!!
I wouls say....check out frame 101-102. The guy just before starts descending down....u could increase the hang time there.........and btw great delay that u gave over ther...the body starts descending first.........!!but the stretch that is happening over ther with the head....u could lower the entire body in the next 2 frames or so and then stretch the head to give the weighty feeling..!!
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