Home Mentorium
Welcome, Guest
Please Login or Register.    Lost Password?

Squash-Stretch-Exaggerate
(1 viewing) (1) Guest
Don't be shy! Show us what you've been up to. Everyone has to start somewhere, and we're here to help you out.
Go to bottomPage: 1
TOPIC: Squash-Stretch-Exaggerate
#353
Squash-Stretch-Exaggerate 2 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 0
Hey,

I just did this test focussing on Squashing,Stretchin,Antic and Exaggeration--Timing included ofcourse..
Chk this out.!

bhogi
Fresh Boarder
Posts: 12
graphgraph
User Offline Click here to see the profile of this user
Location: Hyderabad, India
The administrator has disabled public write access.
 
#354
Re:Squash-Stretch-Exaggerate 2 Years, 4 Months ago Karma: 0
Most of your key poses are good, but you need to change the timing :

The ball's stretching at the beginning is too long and too static, you can make it shorter : the ball stretches and then squashes without stop. This will make a good anticipation.

I love the exaggeration in the jump, but the ball becomes suddenly slow when it reaches the top ! Make it faster and make sure we can feel the weight of it. The ball stops in the air and that's not good.

Hope this helps !
Olivier Vuil
Fresh Boarder
Posts: 17
graphgraph
User Offline Click here to see the profile of this user
www.olivier-vuil.com
The administrator has disabled public write access.
 
#357
Re:Squash-Stretch-Exaggerate 2 Years, 4 Months ago Karma: 0
Hey Oliver,

Thanks a lot dude...!!....Sorry about the hanging part man.....maybe I just pushed it to the extreme......ill just tone it down. I am noting down all the points uv mentioned.

Once again thanks a lot for your time dude....this kindof feedback is what I need right now.!
bhogi
Fresh Boarder
Posts: 12
graphgraph
User Offline Click here to see the profile of this user
Location: Hyderabad, India
The administrator has disabled public write access.
 
Go to topPage: 1
Moderators: thadeej